“I
can see it now. Whatever this is, it's big. Two cylindrical
projections on top, one below. Purpose undetermined.”
Now,
it seems like the most obvious idea ever. Make the Enterprise a UFO.
However, to bring such a simple idea to the screen, writer D.C.
Fontana has to solve a number of problems including creating a
mechanism for getting the Enterprise back in time, giving the crew
something to do, thinking about how they interact with 20th
Century Earth, and returning them home safely. What we see now is a
scriptwriter working through an idea which would become a Star Trek
staple; complete with all sorts of interesting bumps resulting
from this being the first time out for this concept.
One of these interesting bumps is that Tomorrow Is Yesterday is not contemporary to it's broadcast in 1967. Increasing distance from 1967 means we lose sight of this but the story is clearly set in an unnamed year which can be read as 1969.
RADIO NEWSREADER: This is the five thirty news summary. Cape Kennedy. The first manned Moon shot is scheduled for Wednesday, six am Eastern Standard Time. All three astronauts who are to make this historic [KIRK signals for transmission to be cut off]
One of these interesting bumps is that Tomorrow Is Yesterday is not contemporary to it's broadcast in 1967. Increasing distance from 1967 means we lose sight of this but the story is clearly set in an unnamed year which can be read as 1969.
RADIO NEWSREADER: This is the five thirty news summary. Cape Kennedy. The first manned Moon shot is scheduled for Wednesday, six am Eastern Standard Time. All three astronauts who are to make this historic [KIRK signals for transmission to be cut off]
KIRK:
Manned Moon shot? That was in the late 1960s.
SPOCK:
Apparently, Captain, so are we.
Fontana's
predictive powers were firing on all cylinders. Apollo 11 lifted off
on Wednesday 16th July, 1969; hopefully she also bought a
lottery ticket the day she wrote that dialogue. Why it was felt
necessary to distance the story from the present is anyone's guess.
Possibly it relates to the same anxiety the production team felt
about not having the Enterprise visit Earth in its' own time. A
desire to avoid anything which could be seen as critical comment on
contemporary America. If NBC Standards and Practices department, or
anyone else, objected to something there is a fig leaf defence that
the story is not intended to comment on 1967 America. Equally,
Fontana may have just felt it made the story marginally more
interesting to set it a few years in the future. The effect is
similar to the 2005 series of Doctor Who when the Doctor takes Rose
from Earth and accidentally returns her a year later. Through the
rest of the series, remembering what seemed to be contemporary Earth
scenes were set one year later always had a slightly disruptive
effect on the viewer; although this becomes increasingly academic as
2005, let along 1967 recedes into the distance. Passage of time also
makes it impossible to recreate the original intent of the story,
which was about the Enterprise travelling back in time to visit the
audience of late 1960s America. Now it's a story like The City On The Edge Of Forever, about the Enterprise crew travelling back
into history. It's strange to remember the historical footage we see
opening the episode was intended to be cutting edge contemporary.
Another
bump is that the method of time travel is slightly more complicated
than it will be in later episodes. According to the script accelerating towards a high gravitational body (the sun or a
black star) carries you back in time and then the acceleration of
snapping away carries you forwards. Presumably this means the
Enterprise's initial encounter with the black star involved the ship
being pulled in at tremendous speed, and travelling back in time,
before the force of all engines in reverse flung the Enterprise away,
and forwards in time with the endpoint of their forward journey being
1969. Likewise we also see an early outing for what becomes known as
the reset button, the tendency for time travel episodes to negate
their own events at the end, but again it doesn't quite work as it
will later on. Somehow beaming the accidentally picked up twentieth
century characters back into themselves means they have no memory of
future events as those future events did not happen as the Enterprise
is no longer there (if that makes sense). Quibbling over this seems
pointless, why have a go at Star Trek for getting its' own
made up science wrong, but it's a good example of where the
boundaries of plausibility lie. Somehow everyone is happy to accept
Kirk's bamboo cannon in Arena, although simply dumping
sulphur, charcoal, and saltpetre in a tube and mixing with a stick
wouldn't make gunpowder. Similarly we accept all manner of bizarre
abilities from Spock simply because he's an alien. But there's
something about the resolution of Tomorrow Is Yesterday which
pushes believability just a little too far.
The Naked Time's weird stub of an ending was originally supposed to
lead into this story; making a two part episode. Whether that second part was to be written by
John D.F. Black or D.C. Fontana is not clear but Fontana's story
outline, which became this episode, is dated 3rd October
1966, not long after The Naked Time aired on 29th
September. It looks as if preparation for broadcast of The Naked
Time reminded someone about their plans for a time travel
episode. Both versions of the story would
have been based on a story idea memo sent by associate producer
Robert Justman in April 1964 which broadly matches the story beats of
Fontana's script. Justman's memo was dated April 12th
1966 so it's possible his inspiration was the April 5th
Congressional hearing into UFOs by the House Armed Services
Committee.
The
tone of the whole story is light comedy; possibly the most overtly
comedic story so far. So, the early scenes with Captain Christopher
tend to downplay his despair at never seeing his wife and children
again, and in fact the whole sub-plot of Christopher not being
allowed to return is dropped with astonishing speed. Effectively it's
raised at the end of act one and resolved in the opening minutes of
act two. The sub-plot of the flirtatious female computer voice lasts
longer. The comedic tone allows a plot which relies on everyone
having an off day but means the multiplying mistakes don't undermine
the characters. Kirk sets the whole story in motion by fixing a
tractor beam on Christopher's aircraft, which then breaks up, so Kirk
has the pilot beamed aboard. Spock forgets to take descendants into
account when analysing Christopher's impact on history. And Kirk is
captured twice by airbase security. The first time results in a guard
being accidentally beamed up, the second in an interrogation where
Kirk is told
FELLINI: I am going to lock you up for two hundred years.
KIRK: That ought to be just about right.
FELLINI: I am going to lock you up for two hundred years.
KIRK: That ought to be just about right.
A
punchline which suggests at this stage the production team hadn't
worked out all of the background details to the series. Later series
more openly state Star Trek takes place around 300 years in
the future. The downside to all this comedy is the episode is not as
funny as the score thinks. Events are constantly accompanied by that
light-hearted quirky music which normally plays under end of episode
tag scenes; where the crew laugh at some comment by Spock. Here it
starts to grate. A situation not helped by the overuse of the same
three or four overly cute musical stings.
Crew deaths: None, it wouldn't really be appropriate given the light comedy tone.
Running total: 25
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