Back in 1990 when the
BBC finally decided to start showing Star Trek: The Next
Generation I was watching Datalore
with my parents. Within about a minute of Lore being reactivated my
mum said, “I'll bet he turns out to be evil.” Some stories have a
weight of inevitability about them. If a character develops a cough
or a headache then they will be dead soon. In The Ultimate
Computer it's obvious things are
going to go badly from the moment Commodore Wesley tells Kirk the
Enterprise will be used to test the new M-5 computer, and that all he
has to do is, “sit back and let the machine do the work.”
Sure enough the M-5 goes berserk after mistaking simulated war games for the real thing and, as is always the way in these situations, Captain Kirk talks the M-5 to death. However, if the overall course of the plot runs on rails The Ultimate Computer deserves some credit for taking an unexpected detour on the way. The first two acts are more character driven than might be expected in a rogue computer story as Kirk tries to cope with discovering that the M-5 really can do his job better. This still gives the story a weirdly contemporary edge. Who wouldn't worry about being replaced by a computer? It's odd to see Kirk so rattled. A man who has faced down Klingons and alien invasions, and generally shown himself to be a decision making machine, is faced with the prospect of being replaced by a machine better at making decisions.
Sure enough the M-5 goes berserk after mistaking simulated war games for the real thing and, as is always the way in these situations, Captain Kirk talks the M-5 to death. However, if the overall course of the plot runs on rails The Ultimate Computer deserves some credit for taking an unexpected detour on the way. The first two acts are more character driven than might be expected in a rogue computer story as Kirk tries to cope with discovering that the M-5 really can do his job better. This still gives the story a weirdly contemporary edge. Who wouldn't worry about being replaced by a computer? It's odd to see Kirk so rattled. A man who has faced down Klingons and alien invasions, and generally shown himself to be a decision making machine, is faced with the prospect of being replaced by a machine better at making decisions.
MCCOY:
We're all sorry for the other guy when he loses his job to a machine.
When it comes to your job, that's different. And it always will be
different.
KIRK:
Am I afraid of losing command to a computer? Daystrom's right. I can
do a lot of other things. Am I afraid of losing the prestige and the
power that goes with being a starship captain? Is that why I'm
fighting it? Am I that petty?
Kirk has dabbled with
self-doubt before but it's never really convinced.
KIRK: I could've prevented all of it.
SPOCK: I don't see how.
KIRK: A walk in paradise, among the green grass and flowers. We should've beamed up at the first sign of trouble.
SPOCK: You are under orders to investigate this planet and this culture.
KIRK: I also have the option to disregard those orders if I consider them overly hazardous. This isn't that important a mission, Spock. Not worth the lives of three of my men. I drop my guard for a minute because I like the smell of growing things, and now three men are dead. And the ship's in trouble.
KIRK: I could've prevented all of it.
SPOCK: I don't see how.
KIRK: A walk in paradise, among the green grass and flowers. We should've beamed up at the first sign of trouble.
SPOCK: You are under orders to investigate this planet and this culture.
KIRK: I also have the option to disregard those orders if I consider them overly hazardous. This isn't that important a mission, Spock. Not worth the lives of three of my men. I drop my guard for a minute because I like the smell of growing things, and now three men are dead. And the ship's in trouble.
In
that scene from The Apple
Kirk's self-doubt is there to justify the Enterprise crew massacre
which it follows. Three crew have been killed and the script needs
Kirk to seem affected. It's an artificial script device because once
Kirk has beaten himself up over the deaths of Kaplan, Hendorff, and
Mallory it's never mentioned again in the episode; not even when
Marple is also killed.
Kirk's
self-doubt is handled much better in The Ultimate Computer
. “I've never felt this way before. At odds with the ship. I sat
there and watched my ship perform for a mass of circuits and relays,
and felt useless. Unneeded.” It makes Kirk petty and he takes any
chance he can to downplay the achievements of the M-5. “All it's
done is make the required course changes and some simple turns.
Mister Sulu and Mister Chekov could've done that with their eyes
closed.” This time self-doubt is not an emotion he indulges in and forgets, it's a
theme running through the first two acts. It humanises Kirk because
we can relate to what he is going through. He's not declaiming, “why
oh why didn't I realise this weird alien planet was alien and weird?”
He's faced with the realisation that he is the best person he knows
at doing his job, and yet the machine is better.
With
this in mind it's interesting to see the end of act one used as a red
herring. “Captain, I've located the source of the power shutdowns.
It's the M-5 unit, sir. That thing's turning off systems all over the
ship.” Scotty's line bluffs the audience into thinking M-5 is out
of control. Throughout act one Kirk and the audience have seen the
M-5 unit performing flawlessly. Kirk and the audience are both
waiting for the M-5 to fail. Kirk because he doesn't want to be
replaced in a job he loves, and the audience because they know the
M-5 won't be around next week so it's due to be proved faulty at some
point. When Daystrom discovers the reason for the shut downs in the
opening moments of act two it's designed to confound audience
expectations, “as I suspected, it is not a malfunction. M-5 was
merely shutting down power to areas of the ship that do not require
it.”
In
a different episode the M-5 going mad would be the moment of crisis.
Act one would have ended with the discovery that M-5 will not allow
itself to be turned off and the remaining three acts would have been
about the crew's attempts to disable the rogue machine. Instead of
being the crisis point for the whole story the M-5 seizing control is
the resolution to the plot about Kirk's fear of replacement, and also
ups the stakes for the second half.
Ironically
it's the characterisation which stops The Ultimate Computer from
achieving it's full potential. Not the characterisation of Kirk,
Spock, and McCoy which is spot on. In fact McCoy get all the best
lines in the episode, and this is some of the best material he's
given across the series. “Did you see the love light in Spock's
eyes? The right computer finally came along.” The problem lies with the characterisation
of the secondary characters which never quite seems right.
Commodore
Wesley really dislikes Kirk. There's his “Captain Dunsel” comment
(Dunsel apparently being an academy term for a part which performs no
useful purpose) made over an open communicator so the Enterprise
bridge crew, and possibly the crew in the other ships, can all hear
him burn their captain. Then when the M-5 has taken over and is using
lethal force during the war games Wesley believes it's Kirk who is
out of control. “Jim. Have you gone mad? What are you trying to
prove? Break off the attack! Jim, we have fifty three dead here... If
you can hear us, stop the attack.” When the Lexington takes damage
there's a shot of Wesley on the bridge asking, “what the devil is
Kirk doing?” It brings to mind the season one story Court Martial where the other starship captains at Starbase 11 are all
too willing to believe Kirk killed Ben Finney. Unfortunately the
episode wants to end with a point about the M-5 lacking the human
factor by having Wesley make a leap of faith, “the Enterprise looks
dead. I'm going to take a chance he's not just laying a trap.” Kirk
is gambling on Wesley's humanity, but if Wesley really thought Kirk
had gone mad (and note the 'he' in Wesley's line about laying a trap)
and murdered so many with his attack, then would Wesley show any
compassion?
Likewise
Daystrom is written a little off beam. He's great for the majority of
the episode, acting exactly like a proud parent indulging his baby,
and always trying to find the best motive for the M-5's increasingly
bizarre actions. After the M-5 overrides the off switch Daystrom
convinces himself it's in the best interests of the unit to not
switch it off. When the M-5 destroys an automated ore freighter he
describes this as, “minor difficulties,” and when the computer
vaporises engineer Harper while directly tapping the power of the
warp engines Daystrom tries to dismiss this as an accident. “The
ensign simply got in the way.” However, no matter how wilfully
blind Daystrom wants to be there is one moment he can't really
ignore.
After
the M-5 destroys the automatic ore freighter Kirk, Spock, and
Daystrom head to engineering to turn off the M-5, only to find it has
protected itself with a force field. “ It's not my doing, Kirk,”
says Daystrom, and presumably this means the M-5 was not built with
the ability to project force fields; this makes sense it would be
rather like fitting airbags to a desktop PC. Still it's not just
Daystrom who overlooks this new ability. Once M-5 has repelled Kirk,
it's never mentioned again, in fact this amazing ability of the M-5
unit is demonstrated and then shuffled off screen as quickly as
possible because it's a sticking plaster on the story logic. An easy
answer to someone's question during script development wondering why
Kirk didn't just head down to engineering with a phaser and melt the
M-5 into slag. Sometimes these fixes make the story stronger, see By Any Other Name and the Kelvan's ability to distill humans into solid
shapes which results in the memorable death of Yeoman Thompson, but
here it fixes one story logic question only to raise another; why
doesn't Daystom notice his computer can do things it was not designed
or built to do?
Lastly
there's M-5 itself which counts as a character because it's based on
Daystrom's engrams. It's never clear why the machine goes mad. It
just goes from coping with a surprise simulated attack, to taking pot
shots at automatic ore freighters, before moving on to mass murder. Still there's enough slack built
into the script to allow viewers to supply their own explanations.
Given that Daystrom did imprint his own engrams on the machine it's
possible that what we see is overconfidence. The M-5 is as
frustrated, for want of a better word, at Kirk for constantly taking
the Enterprise back under control as Daystrom, “you'll find it
won't be necessary for you to regain control of the unit after it's
completed each manoeuvre.” It sees the ore freighter as an
opportunity to cut loose and show what it can really do.
Overconfidence blinds the M-5 to the consequences of destroying the
freighter, and once it realises what it has done it has no
alternative but to protect itself by destroying any pursuing ship.
It's
easy to watch The Ultimate Computer
and wonder what benefits Starfleet expected from the M-5. Yes the
computer was incredibly good at small details, such as recalling
personnel details even Kirk didn't have instantly to hand, and it
could steer the ship as efficiently as a human navigator, and it was
better in direct combat, but when have we ever seen the events in an
episode hinge on one of those factors? It's difficult to see what
advantages M-5 could have brought to the battle against the Gorn in Arena. How would it have dealt with the Kelvans from By
Any Other Name or Apollo in
Who Mourns For Adonais? But
asking this question misses the point. The episode is not about why
Starfleet would want to replace Captain Kirk with a computer, it's
about what will happen when computers get clever enough to replace
even Captain Kirk. Thematically The Ultimate Computer
belongs with stories like The Return Of The Archons, or
A Taste Of Armageddon where
people's lives and deaths are planned centrally by a big computer.
That seems to have been the future perception of computers in 1968.
Not the internet, but a big central IBM computer which told you when
to work, when to sleep, and when to eat your protein pills. This
attitude is the reason Commodore Wesley demands to know what Kirk
thinks he is doing when the M-5 attacks the war game fleet. The
Ultimate Computer is warning
that in the future the infallible computer will be your boss, and
when it goes wrong you'll still get the blame.
Running total: 46
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