William Windom is
brilliant as Commodore Matt Decker. It's probably the best
performance by a guest star on a series not always notable for
allowing guest stars to shine. Unless an actor is extremely good, or
very lucky, they stand little chance of making an impression against
Star Trek's regular cast and attendant science-fiction gubbins
(winking lights, strange makeup, weird noises, bizarre creatures,
etc). Pity poor Alfred Ryder credited as the guest star of The Man Trap when all the audience remembers is the salt vampire, or
Robert Brown dropped at the last minute into a thankless role (technically two thankless roles) in
The Alternative Factor and unable to make
an impression against the special effects of that episode. There are
actors who make Star Trek work for them. William Campbell, as Trelane in The Squire Of Gothos, and Ricardo
Montalban, as Khan in Space Seed both
take big central characters and make them their own. More
impressively Mark Lenard, as the Romulan Commander with no name in
Balance Of Terror, and
Celia Lovsky as T'Pau in Amok Time
both make very good impressions in considerably smaller roles than
those given to Ricardo Montalban or William Campbell. Generally
speaking though Star Trek tends to be a series which treats
the guest star role as disposable. A slot which can be filled by
simply giving the star something different to do (evil Kirk in The Enemy Within), or by a prop (Nomad in The Changeling), or
a costume (the Gorn, Arena), or by not bothering with a guest
star at all (Operation – Annihilate!).
William
Windom is so good it comes as something of a disappointment to
discover he thought the role, “seemed kind of silly, with the planet eater and spaceships. It's like doing a cartoon, so I acted accordingly!” As a fan, his blunt comment disappoints for two
reasons. First because as a non-actor it's easy to assume an actor
has to like the material to turn in a good performance (an assumption
most actors would probably consider an insult to their
professionalism). Secondly because The Doomsday Machine
is great. It would be nice to think some of that greatness rubbed off on Windom and made him remember this job as different from
the more run of the mill material. Still, it's a reasonable
assessment from an actor with an amazingly long career, who seemed to
regard television as the disposable portion of his work. The
Doomsday Machine was one of ten
jobs Windom had in 1967 (the others being parts in Run for
Your Life, The Fugitive, Bob Hope Presents the Chrysler Theatre, Hour
of the Gun, The Invaders, Custer, Gentle Ben, Dundee and the Culhane,
and Judd for the
Defense). Imagine how the job
must have appeared from his perspective. Five days schlepping across
Los Angeles to a soundstage at Desilu (a company past its prime),
surrounded by the aforementioned blinking lights and actors in strange makeup, and being told to look scared at something the production
team will add later.
There's
a surprising similarity between Commodore Decker and Finney from
Court Martial. Most obviously in both cases the production
team dress the character in a gold coloured top, and give them
stubble; apparently the ultimate sign in the 1960s of someone losing
their mind. Both actors use the same performance style for their
character; letting their voice crack, bulging their eyes, and making
quick transitions between emotional states. The key difference is Windom's performance works while Richard Webb's seems
melodramatic and over the top. Party this is down to the way each
character is introduced to the audience. Court Martial spends
a great deal of its running time telling us how everyone loves
Finney; he's popular in Starfleet (certainly much more popular than
Kirk judging by the welcome he gets at Starbase 11), and generally
together enough to assemble (and fake evidence for) an elaborate
revenge plot against Captain Kirk. When Finney is finally revealed as
a ranting, barely in control madman there's a mismatch between what
the audience has been told, and what they are shown, and Webb's
performance seems wrong. By contrast The Doomsday Machine sets
up two destroyed planetary systems, and a wrecked starship. After
Matt Decker is introduced in a virtually catatonic state Windom's
performance seems appropriate because his character has obviously
gone through hell. Also, Windom is a better actor than Webb. That's
not to run down Webb's performance too much because he's fine in
Court Martial, but Windom is just astonishing.
KIRK:
Matt, where's your crew?
DECKER:
On the third planet.
KIRK:
There is no third planet.
DECKER:
Don't you think I know that? There was, but not anymore. They called
me. They begged me for help, four hundred of them. I couldn't. I
couldn't.
Windom
brings those lines to life. His red-eyed, crumpled face delivery of
“don't you think I know that,” is pure melodrama but it works
perfectly and sets a doom-laden tone for the rest of the episode.
It's no surprise to learn he used to self-deprecatingly refer to himself as
Willie the Weeper.
It's
the addition of Matt Decker to The Doomsday Machine which
makes Norman Spinrad's script sing. His character defines the threat
to the Enterprise, acting as a warning from the future of what Kirk
could become if his luck ever runs out. Decker also doubles the
threat to the Enterprise crew. There's the external threat from the
planet killer, and the internal one from Decker who is obsessed with
taking revenge against the machine which killed his crew. Decker's
presence also makes Kirk more heroic. It's not accidental that Decker
as a Commodore outranks both Spock and Kirk. If Decker was a mere
Captain he would still be able to take charge of the Enterprise but
there would be no drama in the scene where Kirk orders Spock to
relieve Decker. It would simply be one Captain taking action against
another, the scene only works because Kirk has to undercut the chain
of command. The script also shows why Spock is a natural second in
command. He knows Decker is wrong but he plays
things by the book and follows regulations. He lacks Kirk's ability
to make an intuitive leap and find another solution. Essentially
Spock's plan is to keep confronting Decker with the facts until he
listens to reason. “You tried to destroy it once before,
Commodore. The result was a wrecked ship and a dead crew.” Spock doesn't understand emotion enough to realise
that saying astonishingly brutal things like that don't help; especially not to someone still
grieving over the deaths of 430 crew. The scenes where Decker assumes
command of the Enterprise show what an asset Leonard Nimoy is to Star
Trek. When Deforest Kelly yells, “do something,” Nimoy's
stone-faced stare manages to project the impression that Spock's mind
is going at a million miles an hour trying to find a way to relieve
Decker of command; really Nimoy was probably wondering what to have
for lunch.
The
presence of Commodore Decker is also what separates the threat in The
Doomsday Machine from the
similar one posed by Nomad three episodes ago in The
Changeling. Both are apparently
unstoppable machines capable of wiping out planetary systems, and
both pose a massive threat to the Enterprise. Apart from the
difference in size, it's only Nomad's ability to talk which separates
the two. The dividing line between good and average stories is very
fine and it's easy to imagine transplanting elements from The
Changeling into The
Doomsday Machine. Nomad could
easily have sterilized the Constellation crew, leaving Decker out for
revenge and shocked by the threat posed by something so small. Or,
Kirk could have beamed inside the planet killer and talked the
controlling computer to death with illogic. Kirk is also dealing with
a considerable ramping up of threat. Over the last year and a bit he's gone from dealing with a single salt vampire on the Enterprise,
to planetary outbreaks of insanity, to machines capable of destroying
entire planetary systems.
Marc Daniels, a solid
workmanlike director, injects some flourishes into the bridge scenes.
Most notably in a lovely tracking shot which starts on Sulu, follows
a yellow shirted ensign round to Kirk who then walks in front of the
bridge screen and around to Spock. Daniels must have been,
understandably, proud of this shot as he repeats it with Kirk and Spock
at the end of the episode. Film editor Donald R. Rode also does good
work intercutting Kirk and McCoy searching the Constellation with
Scotty and the damage control team examining engineering. He also
manages to extend the final 30 second countdown to 90 seconds.
Something which he makes tense, rather than silly, by cutting
frantically between the Enterprise bridge, Scotty attempting to fix
the transporter, the transporter room, exterior shots, and Kirk on
the Constellation, “Gentlemen, I suggest you beam me aboard.”
Helping Donald R.
Rode's cutting in the 30 second countdown is Sol Kaplan's astonishing
score. As the planet killer closes on the Constellation, Kaplan gives
us a pulsing rhythm which speeds up and increases the tension as the
Constellation and the planet killer close on each other, and ends on
cornets blaring as the planet killer is destroyed. Kaplan's music is
what makes The Doomsday Machine such an outstanding Star Trek
episode. It perfectly underscores big moments like Decker flying the
shuttle into the planet killer's maw and small ones like the first
sighting of the crippled Constellation. Just as important, Kaplan
understands the value of silence. When the Enterprise is caught in
the planet killer's tractor beam, and Spock threatens to relieve
Decker on the grounds that his actions would amount to suicide, the
whole scene plays out with no music, and instead the score is brought
back on Sulu's line, “we're being pulled inside” to make the
ending of act two more dramatic.
Kaplan also composes a
theme for people using the transporter which leads to a great musical
double-bluff as Kirk sets the timer running on Scotty's lashed up
self-destruct system for the Constellation. In the build up to Kirk
pressing the red button the music is playing the pulsing planet
killer pursuit theme. As he presses the button a trumpet plays a
little flurry which extends out into a single held note. The same
note as the one which starts the already established transporter
theme. As the film cuts to a shot of the transporter the music sounds
as if it is making a transition between the theme for the planet
killer and the one for the transporter and it tricks the audience
into expecting to see Kirk beamed safely aboard. Instead the
transporter gives out a puff of smoke, and the held note breaks up
into a musical sting. Amusingly, Kaplan is the name of one of the unfortunate
guards killed in The Apple
(the 9th
episode filmed, after The Doomsday Machine
but shown the week before), he's the one zapped by lightning, maybe
someone on the writing team was having a joke.
Enterprise crew deaths: None.
Running total: 34
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