On 15th October 1968
Leonard Nimoy wrote a stinging memo to Gene Roddenberry and Doug
Cramer, who had replaced Herbert Solow as Executive in Charge of
Production. The memo complained about the script for Whom Gods
Destroy describing it as,"re-doing a show we did during the
first season... Dagger of the Mind." The memo is
reprinted in Leonard Nimoy's biography I Am Spock and
is critical the quality of the script and third season Star
Trek but reserves most of its
punches for the portrayal of Spock.
"[Spock]
walks into a room, phaser in hand, and is confronted by two
"Kirks"...can Spock handle the situation using his
deductive logic, the phaser in his hand... or any other of the
imaginative techniques that a smart ass Vulcan would normally use?
The answer is: NO... My primary interest in contacting you gentlemen
is my concern over my lack of experience in playing dummies... Maybe
if I watched some "Blondie" episodes... Or better still, I
could get right to the bottom line by wearing some braids and
feathers and learning to grunt, "Ugh, Kimosabee"?"
The finished episode is the result of the
rewrite to take Leonard Nimoy's comments into account. Spock still looks like an idiot but to be fair so
does Kirk, who is also unable to come up with a way to confirm his
identity, and Garth, who forgets he has a working phaser although
where it goes when he shape shifts is anyone's guess, and the entire
Enterprise bridge crew who spend the episode fretting about the
situation on Elba II but fail to take the initiative when the
security forcefield is dropped. Sloppy writing isn't unusual for Star
Trek. The existence of The Alternative Factor is proof it
was possible for everyone concerned to drop the ball. What's unusual
here is the tag scene where Kirk talks to Spock after the
fight.
KIRK: Tell me something. Why was it so impossible to tell the difference between us?
KIRK: Tell me something. Why was it so impossible to tell the difference between us?
SPOCK:
It was not impossible, Captain. Our presence here is proof of that.
KIRK:
Yes, and congratulations. What took you so long?
SPOCK:
The interval of uncertainty was actually fairly brief, Captain. It
only seemed long to you. I was waiting for a victor in the hand to
hand struggle, which I assumed would be Captain Garth. Because of
your depleted condition. Failing a resolution to the struggle, I was
forced to use other means to make my determination.
KIRK:
I see. Mister Spock. Letting yourself be hit on the head, and I
presume you let yourself be hit on the head, is not exactly a method
King Solomon would have approved. Mister Scott, ready to beam up.
What makes this tag
scene odd is the deliberate way it draws attention to Spock being
stupid. Why write a character as an idiot, and then mock the
character for actions the writer has imposed? Leonard Nimoy is pretty
open in I Am Spock about being protective of the character. He
gives examples of memos he wrote regarding Spectre Of The Gun, and
a dispute over the IDIC medallion seen in Is There In Truth No Beauty? It's not impossible
this is writers revenge. A warning shot to Leonard Nimoy from the
production team that writers write and actors act. Then again it
could just be bad writing. If the production team were utterly wedded
to the two Kirks fight idea then short of drastic rewriting the
easiest way to take the sting out of Spock's sudden inability to use
his brain is to acknowledge it; to wink to the audience over the
story and go 'we know this is silly, and we know you know this is
silly' as noted in the review for Wink Of An Eye.
Apart
from the tag scene there's little notable about Whom Gods
Destroy. Garth and Marta are
both insane but it's strictly television madness meaning they do
little more than act like capricious children. In the end Garth is
Trelane without the omnipotence; but in The Squire Of Gothos the danger develops as
Trelane acquires a taste for the hunt, "but this is such sport.
I must fetch all the others back to play," and Trelane has the
power to carry out his threat. Without the countersign to the code
"queen to queen's level three" Garth is trapped on Elba II.
And although Kirk and Spock are trapped at a madman's whim nothing
too bad can happen to them with NBC's Standards and Practices
Department making sure the torture isn't too traumatic for viewers.
The story is on hold from the moment Garth discovers he can't get up
to the Enterprise until he's finally stunned into unconsciousness by
Spock. In fact this is a pretty Spock light story. He's dragged off
stunned at the beginning of act one, reappears for the banquet in act
two, and then disappears until he's needed to end the episode. It's
as if someone on the production team realised Spock's presence was
potentially story breaking but also necessary for the scene where
Garth disguises himself as Spock.
It's
easy to see why Whom Gods Destroy
was made. It has a limited number of sets, few speaking parts, not
too many special effects requirements, and allows the chance to reuse
some old costumes and props. It's a lot harder to believe anyone was passionate
about making this episode. In Inside Star Trek
Robert Justman writes of the third season. "By the time episodes
were filmed, whatever excitement existed in the original stories and
scripts had been diluted... it was now strictly budget driven. There
were no highs and no lows -just a boring in-between. My never ending
battle to cut costs without compromising quality had failed."
Whom Gods Destroy was
the first episode produced without co-producer Robert Justman, he'd
resigned to go and work for Herbert
Solow at MGM Television.
Enterprise crew deaths: None.
Running total: 50
Enterprise crew deaths: None.
Running total: 50
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